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I'm not biased on gender bent stories, stil, I'm conflicted with my review lolThe premises were kinda okay, not bad but it's like the author suddenly changed after a few chapters. The protagonist is a bonafide Mary Sue, the universe bends to her will. Doesn't help that almost every chapter has lines that praises the MC's "beauty", this could be fine if executed well.... ifThe MC's character isn't as fleshed out as well, his/her personality is puzzling, it doesn't make sense. S/He's so disgustingly arrogant? On second thought, this could mean that MC was one of those tr*shy type of fans. Wish it was addressed though. Then there's also moments where you're wondering "Where did MC' braincells go??" I don't know if this is the author's poor attempt of a "flaw" or it's just plain as day plot armor paving the way for MC's success. Long story short, it really does feel like a self insert fanfic. Was hoping it wouldn't tbh, I don't mean to insult fanfics because there's genuinely some that are so good that they can become their own world. This is one of those MCs with strong af golden halos. It's like power level p*rn or something. I guess it's one of those guilty pleasure reads where we're not supposed to think too much, I was really hoping for better though. Maybe it will get better, hopefully it will by the time the main cast is complete.