- #1
So, this is really good. The world building, especially the building of the nations social structure, is really good. The power system is fleshed out. The fighting can be a bit complex at times. The author leaves notes on how stuff works a t the end of each chapter which helps because it is rather complex. The way characters are written is refreshingly good for Japanese light novels. That is, all of the characters have different opinions and viewpoints on different matters. And the conversations are written in such a way that these are reflected in them. Honestly this is a really solid work.There is one problem however.Spoiler
The main cast is 5 years too young. The MC is 13, and a bunch of other important side characters that he can relate to is 12 or 13. This is a problem because they are all written like young adults (16-20). They talk like adults, act like adults, and are treated like adults. And while you can make an excuse for the MC having to adapt or die due to his childhood and that the side characters are mostly nobles expected to grow up early, it still feels really jarring.
[collapse]Beyond that however I would say this one does everything really well. This has quality. 5 stars as of v2c2 part5.