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Average writing, red till chapter 195 and it feels like a waste of time, MC has zero interess besides magic, no clear goals like pursuit of immortality, being the strongest or something else. Far from Warlock of Magus World and Throne of Magic Arcana, even Soul of Negary has more humane interactions, with a clear goal of becoming god at any price; the moments where MC is ruthless, merciless and uses everyone and everything seem within reason because of a clearly set goal.On the other hand, Mage Adam writing looks forced, interactions seem strange or simply not believable. Even face slapping is not enjoyable. Writer himself had another 2 works both sacked at 80 chapters and in last one he said that he is not suitable for writing.If you have the patience continue maybe it becomes better latter on