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(Edit at the end.) Chapter 157 Review:TL;DR: An incredible story in numerous regards that is an actual difficult read due to the translator. (By the way, I disagree with almost all of the criticism presented by other reviewers. All other issues aside from the translator are negligible, and I would recommend at least checking it out.) I'll start with the critique since there is only one.There was initially a team translating/editing this book until about chapter 100 and it was fantastic to read, a solidly above-average translation. However, it then got dropped by that team and picked up by a new translator.His translation style is, for lack of a better word, immature. He heavily overuses basic adverbs like "super", "really", and "totally." It snags my eye every time and it happens easily a dozen times every chapter. It lowers the writing quality of the entire book for me, despite the great author. This isn't even mentioning some of the other extremely unprofessional words he overuses such as "thing", "stuff", "chill", and "awesome."It literally turns the book from a gritty dark fantasy to a comedy similar to Invisible Dragon. In fact, the similarities are so startling that I believe that the translator is actually a child.Below is a quote from the novel, by a several thousand year old, refined mage:"Priscilla said, "Okay, I get the lab thing, but why the doppelganger stuff? That's for super advanced mages[...]"Now, onto the numerous list of positives.First of all, I love the main character. He is cold, calm, and rational when he needs to be, and not overly static when he doesn't. He still has human attachments that he builds and maintains in peacetime, allowing for there to be rather good character interactions despite the premise. He is stated to be extremely smart, and this is also shown throughout the entire novel. None of his decision making seems to be forced by the author, and he consistently makes good and intelligent choices in his situations.The main character is definitely one of my favorite parts of this novel, there is nothing I would change about him.Second of all, the power system. The power system in this novel is that strength is directly linked to knowledge. Knowledge makes you stronger, not just because of applications of it, but also because the world grants strength for new discoveries.The reason this is such a positive to me is that it pushes the main character to research and become a learned and well-rounded powerhouse. The explanations from the author about the main characters discoveries fit in the setting and are one of the best areas of this novel for me.Third of all, the potential. This is a story where interdimensional travel exists, allowing the main character to travel to different worlds and planes and see unique cultures. This is my favorite plotline of all time and allows the story to remain "new" even after hundreds or thousands of chapters.Together with the power system I adore, this novel will certainly be fantastic.Finally, the plot itself. At no point in this novel did it feel stale. There is constantly something going on and something exciting to look forward to. There are no arcs which slow the story progression and it is constantly a fun and engaging read.I LOVE everything about this novel, and I am STILL dropping it. That is how aggravating the translation is to me. I physically can't read another "super fast" without losing my mind and rating this novel 1 star.However, I would HIGHLY recommend reading the first 100 chapters and see if you can stick around when the new translator takes over. If you can survive his translation, I'm sure you'll love the rest of the novel.Chapter 216 Review:I couldn't let go of this novel despite the translation and thank god I didn't. Translation rapidly improved after the chapter I left my review. It was initially happening a dozen times a chapter, then quickly went down to one, and now it hasn't happened in more than 20 chapters. Given that the singular flaw of this novel has been remedied, this has become an obvious 5 star novel for me. I highly recommend it!
