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It's dry. The first part where he trained the hermaphrodite was interesting and kinky, but soon he left without pulling out any more tricks. Like we got plugged -> doctor scene -> vine scene, then it died??? So much more potential, no one turns depraved with that little. If the author continued to train instead of hopping r*pe then it would've been better. I mean the r*pe scenes were dry since there was no build-up, and it was vanilla r*pe, and... Like it's just plain r*pe (where the victim is masochistically enjoying it... glorification, but that's typical of a r*pe kink). The S&M parts... he's a soft sadist, he tries to train his pets but lets them off by forcing them to say shameful words... Sir? If you are training why do you let them go repeatedly with only a shameful sentence? He's too quick to shove his schlong in.
