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This story starts okay at first. The sister stealing her fiance and then the MC was suicidal to give herself worth? I don't want to use that word but the way her mentality and reason to go through this "ritual" made it seem like she is.I wouldn't mind it as much cause this is fiction after all there is bound to be mistakes. But there has to be a reason to stay invested. And that this story is lacking two aspects. The political and the romance.Romance wise was odd. The MC has potential but when paired with the ML whose feelings has just begun from interest at first feels mildly forced. It's mainly because the author puts too much going on.Like this is where the political stuff was not incorporated well. There's need to be a balance where political and romance needs to be or focused on one thing then introduce the other.The author decided to show both but there's too much going on.For example, she's supposed to be the sacrifice and was expected to die. Further on the story suddenly she was discovered not dead. And she has good relationship with the dragon. The one who discovered her is an acquaintance? That also has a crush for her. And somehow because duty he has to report she is not dead. Why? Like sure she's still alive was shocking and has good relationship with the dragon. But this person is in love with her. There has to be some common sense that by reporting this matter, she's going to get thrown into a power struggle. Also it's way too soon she hasn't even develop a decent relationship with the ML except getting new place to live and flew around the sky. The development is too little.It's not boring but too much stuff going on can drain you. Just know reading this for the romance can be frustratating.