Kensei Ni Uragirareta Osananajimi Tabiji Chapter 128 Discussion

I went ahead and read the raws because the paywall lock was so too damn far ahead.

Here are my impressions so far:

This story is about NTR. There you go. MC is ntr'd from the get go. The first few chapters so far were ok. Then it went mellow when they introduced the main demon/beast race characters. Around here it shows the authors inexperience in life in general, fumbling around here and there and was not able to write compelling scenarios. Just a little more but not enough. It reflects the authors lack of experience with human relationships in the real world and his imagination is lacking to make up for it. There were also a lot of rewrites of several chapters so poor readers who are on current chapter lol. Also the rewritten parts are not an improvement overall. I also agree on the original site comments that some chapters are longer that they should be. I also hate the author for making a SPOILER episode FFS. It went on and will still go on for at least 2 volumes until we get to this part of the story that was spoiled!!! I mean wtf dude way to ruin it!!!

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And the procrastination... FFS is soooo frustrating!!! He was given the option to power up by being half dragon!!! But completely rejects it for more than 1 VOLUME!!! And he kept boasting on and on even if he gets beaten up by the Demonwolf swordsaint!!! It's already war time and he doesn't have a sense of urgency. His wife almost gets killed half the time and still procrastinates! Whats good about keeping your body human when your facing the unreasonableness of the powers of the "Heroes". Will you not move until your wife dies!? His wolf friend is half dead because she protected your wife like you didn't learn anything even the wife said to take the power because everything will be no good if everyone is dead or worse ens*aved! Finally he takes the fist step of the ritual and stops... why??? I don't know because the MC is a cuck and I think his wife needs to be cuck'd by the hero again I swear!!! This needs to happen. Also the BS of his body becoming poison to humans suddenly said by the doctor... Really??? Did they even do human tests??? Really fck. This late in the game. But here is the question. Will you be having a divorce once you cannot fk your wife? Is Mia and the MC that shallow. Can't you worry about that later and find some remedy you know... AFTER THE WAR!!!!

Everything is meaningless if everyone dies!!! And the Demon nobles are so nonchalant on the eve of war! The demon forces deserves to be rolled over by the humans since the Demon Lion King is a weak leader. Weak presence. Does his position even have meaning!? The author really botched it up big time here and vol 4 is very poorly written and dragged on and on. And about Yukina. I wish her more suffering. And I wish the author will not try do give her some redemption. I wish she kills MC's wife because MC is cuck. The author also loves to be cckl'ed. MC needs to learn what's at stake. He is also several times disrespected the dragon princess kindness and keeps on rejecting over and over. When will you power up. Until everyone you love is dead and the makai people ens*aved.

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