Kensei Ni Uragirareta Osananajimi Tabiji Chapter 137 Discussion

It’s been a year since Prinny review and here is all happens in the raw thus far:

Spoiler

1. The main character finally decided to become half dragon, however his pattern of behaviour so far made him the Ver.2 Hero. As Prinny said, war time urgency is almost none in here, the author must intentionally do this to drag the story going on and building up the frustration for the next plot.

2. The NTR is quite savage I'd say, but there is only 2 NTR scenes depict so far, one in the start of the story and one in C134 (Mia is fine, I will get to this again later). So if you avoid this thing because of NTR, you chose the wrong reason to dodge this minefield.

3. Human forces lead by the hero is attacking the demon world, even though the gain they made is insignificant for you to pay attention to.

4. Sheena (the Main Character) growth is s*upidly slow, slooooow. I get that he is still 16, but come on you killed big amount of people already, why scared of a change? I also still does not get why he is afraid of being a half dragon, is he scared of outlived Mia or something? Oh and as of C137, he finally working on growth, but he is still going around playing with the Vampire Princess (I got no idea why, maybe if someone read the raws more carefully will correct me?).

[collapse]

Gotta agree, the Author is a maso, he wanted to see a tragic story happen to the main characters so he put many main character walking on fires.

Now, Mia NTR:

Spoiler

As I said, she is fine, albeit close. This NTR actually are to make your anxiety went up to rush up the story (I think because he realize his writing is too slow by now) and to give redemption point to the Bow and Sage companion of the hero. Yukina was depict quite bad in this scenes, while Mia is being forced down the bed she did not intervene but stand guard, and then when the two other came she complain why no one helped her but Mia (The others does inquire back her behaviour when she got push down tho, I don't have to go back to that). Mia was rescue, and she will be fine as long as the two other got her back.

[collapse]

But all of this can be avoided, like the last 20 chapters can already be avoid if Sheena and Mia did not be so naive and stubborn, like as Prinny said:

Spoiler

Sheena rejected the power, a lot of times when he could have got it and speed up his growth (he did now) early on and not right now, and he need to stop fantasizing about Mia getting screwed by the hero (hate fuel probably, but if he actually trained instead of fk around with his harem it would make more sense?). And Mia's decision to become a spies actually is a high risk high reward move, but she got many chances of accomplish it before the "Interrogation" and ditch it, which she did not (The author actually send Mia to the hero’s camp just to probably hate fuel Sheena? It would work if you actually made him stop playing around man).

[collapse]

I would not say their character is shallow, because the entire story thus far are focusing on building them the most. But as Prinny review said, the Author writing ability is still mediocre and he is a maso, that's why the decision making is so frustrating to watch.

I gave this 3/5 because despite the fact that the story speed is bs, it’s not bad writing. The release rate is also slow, so you can ditch it until 2025 and won’t miss so much chapters as well. I advise if you don’t like a slow ass story’s telling and inexperience decision making, don’t read this since it will make you very frustrated and anxious.

Also what is the Spoiler chapter, which in raw? Have I missed it?