Aspiring to the Immortal Path Chapter 68 Discussion

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It had a very interesting start with clever and smart MC with intriguing and well written characters. I really liked how the plot was developing and how the MC plans a lot of things and uses his smarts. However the pacing of the later chapters ruin it. 3k words per chapter and barely anything happens, it's just info dumps after info dumps which drastically ruined the experience so 3/5 for a story which otherwise would have been much higher.
 
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