Aspiring to the Immortal Path Chapter 43 Discussion

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3/5 seems low compared to other reviews, BUT, while there are no major issues and the characters and plot aren't bad, they aren't great either.

Protagonist is on rails and even though there are plot twists, he achieves every one of his goals. He's a bit interesting, but he is ALL there is to carry the story, and "a bit" isn't enough.

Another problem that while the chapters are very long, they actually don't progress the story much, because of CONSTANT info-dumps. Instead of letting the reader naturally learn about the world and other story backgrounds bit by bit as the story progresses, that information is condensed into large paragraphs which are dumped inbetween the plot points. It's like reading a booklet in a book. Annoying.
 
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