Citadel for All: The Only Unit Angel at the Start of the Game Chapter 100 Discussion

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Reading this novel is an exercise in patience. It is repetitive, the main character is one dimensional, and the "world chat" interactions serve no real purpose than to show-off how everyone in the whole world respects and fears the MC (OH... and to increase the word count and make it "feel" like you had read a chapter).

After a hundred chapters, the novel advanced seven days. MC's soldiers are way too overpowered to even matter, and there is no tension at all.

So, as I usually do, here come the good, the bad and the ugly:

The good

  • The novel's premise was interesting.
The bad

  • The premise is thrown away right at the start, when the MC is the only one who gets a divine being as soldier type. From then on, it is smooth sailing for his world conquest.
The ugly

  • Everything else...
  • Underage girl becomes MC's underling? Check;
  • "Player's Female Goddess" becomes interested in MC? Check;
  • Other players envious of MC, but praise him anyway? Check;
  • Battles have no tension? Check;
  • Plot develops at a snail's pace? Check, check and check.
I'm not fond of spoilers, but this title's potential readers deserve a warning. So, I'll summarize the first 100 chapters:

Spoiler
  • Humans are brought to a fantasy world to battle for supremacy in a game-like way;
  • Every player is given a random type of creature to command, from useless slimes to the supreme creatures like dragons;
  • MC gets the only divine creature: angels;
  • Players are warned that in seven days the beginner's protection will end and a beast tide will happen;
  • MC develops his castle and summons more and more of his overpowered minions;
  • Nightly raids by monsters kills other players, but poses no threat to MC;
  • Seven days passes and MC's angels kill more monsters than any other force in the world. Chockers.
  • MC chooses a prize for being the first placed in the monster tide.
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