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As of chapter 12, personally it doesn't look so good. Cliche scenarios, obvious plot-armour, jarring plot-holes. I know I only read so much chapter yet I'm frustrated by MC's lack of logic and FLs' dumb misunderstandings. This is just a rant, and I'll update this later after I've read more of this storyUpdate as of chapter 106: Glad I decided to read the rest of the chapters. Indeed, we definitely could have a better start, but it's fun to read if you ignore that. The emotional scenes are a bit cringe, but there's only a few of that so no problem. This was supposed to be hell-mode difficulty, but the author made it a bit too convenient for the MC. Too much onomatopoeia at times, usually when the demon talks. The misunderstanding sometimes feel too forced that I feel they're truly like an 'NPC' that follows what the 'game developer' wants. Still, this is an enjoyable read if you know how to just simply skip unimportant parts and turn off your brain at times when you found something off with the story. Updated it to 5/5.