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Really nice story over, I like how it all ties together. I like how it wasn't just the relationship between the MC and ML that was important, but also the relations they had with those around them and how it changed them for the better. However, I do have to say the secondary characters were very useless to the plot sometimes. For example, when they are first introduced they might do some amazing things and show you how inteligent they are. But then it feels like they aren't as important to the plot, besides to be a motivation for the MC.Spoiler
] The secondary CP where one of them was 16 and the other an adult was very weird and creepy to me. Did not see the point of that at all.
Also the ending arc was a bit frustrating. I felt that besides the MC and ML, everyone else was pretty useless and they all just became people that needed to be saved.
[collapse] But overall, a nice read.