Acting as the Perfect Narrow-Eyed Villain Chapter 80 Discussion

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Well built world and characters and dynamics between characters.

It's a solid story.

However it's bland and gets boring.

The main plot is about Julian playing his 'role', and keeping the game intact.

There's no pursuit for power, we have a system but no clear indication on how to get stronger.

Schemes are not brilliant. It's just MC using his game knowledge. So everything feels bland.

The whole story is about the slit eye character being ruthless and sly. However it gets boring fast when the story heavily depends on this characteristic to carry the plot.

There's nothing thrilling here, we don't feel the insidious and crafty nature of this type of character.

All that's happening is that the already set in stone infamy of the character and his nature is used to intimidate people in various circumstances.
 
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