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Reading as far as c31, each chapter honestly felt like the author's just winging it.Most chapters basically have no actual substance except repetitive and obvious messages that have already been conveyed, over and over again. Some chapters doesn't even mean sh*t.What I didn't like most was that the Omegaverse setting just suddenly appeared. My fault for not reading the tags there but there was no mention of it until like maybe 10 or 15 chapters idk. It was revealed that MC is an omega and he's hiding it because apparently it's a socially acceptable option not to disclose their secondary s*x even though pheromones excretion from heat/rut could involuntarily influence other people. Tryna be unique there but it's unreasonable. But that's not the keypoint, it's that the omegaverse setting was revealed just right before MC's scheduled heat! Probably because author didn't know how to 'naturally' change the nature of their superior/subordinate relationship. And so, the ever so cliché heat cycle incident happens except it stops at a very "helpful" handj*b. Mind you MC was adamant enough to keep to himself throughout the ordeal but ML is just insistent to be helpful while he waits for a doctor who can actually completely solve the problem. And what do yknow, their relationship turns a subtle shift, with ML eventually realising he likes MC.Before all that incidents I actually liked the story and characters albeit nothing really new. But the omegaverse theme was inserted like a shortcut and ML's initially cute impression crumbled to dust instead turning into someone ever so fickle. I continued reading until it finally sunk in me that I just don't like this style of "convenient" writing, neither the new characters, nor the new prospective developments.