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It's a 5/5 for the 1st volume (so upto ch80) and going towards a 3/5 in the second one.The 2nd volume feels like conflict for the sake of conflict and very much in contrast with the 1st volume. The 1st volume is full of fluff and some basic conflicts to push the two together. There is no "bad" guy in this volume and we get some mentions on their backgrounds.The volume 2 starts and we are presented with a massive conflict but 5 chapters later you can deduct it's plot setup just to mess with the two of them essentially, but the author is still dragging it out. To the point where 1 chapter is ONLY 3 SENTENCES LONG. Even for fluffy novels, this has the shortest chapter I have ever seen.The TL is topnotch with some mistranslated words only, but clearly not MTL and edited nicely.SPOILERS UP TO CURRENT TL:Spoiler
When the marriage proposal happened, I already knew it was Charlotte. The comment section seemed to know it as well. The sudden and roundabout way of getting them to the house and the plotting is just really dragged out. Not to mention we had some chapters that are literally 3 sentences. It made me not like Charlotte's mum, the maid, the step-sister characters. Also the lack of Emma is really noticable.
The only reason I am still reading is because they still have some BakaCouple moments and the translation is top notch.
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