Life With A Sister Chapter 82 Discussion

... a lot. Do I like the premise? Sure. It's wholesome. The MC is showered with love, discluded by some. It's really slow. Reaaaaaaly slow. Every female the MC meets holds some sort of affection it seems. Well 7-10. Characters are rarely introduced. And they either love or hate him. It seems every male has a favorable opinion of him, and he's special. Just ask his sister. There's really not a lot of character growth to be told, and it's portrayed as he is always growing but chapter wise there's only really a few where he grows and learns. As of this point he has moved up 3 times in testing and his life is "always" progressing toward his goal.

but.

the writing sometimes is super confusing. "My sister is sister is complaining about me holding character A's hand. So I hold my sister and (have a 35 sentence internal dialogue) I really shouldn't do it, and I blah blah blah with character a while thinking about my sister"... then 3 seconds later he's holding character A's hand while holding his sister and now she isn't mad about it. Stuff like that happens constantly. He says I must be stronger constantly always talking about supporting his family and protecting them but makes minimal strides towards it at least thru what's written. What does happen must be going on in the back ground. He needs money to do all this but only to this point has made 2 items. Which we don't even know the goal amount. Or how much he has actually made. After learning this "root of all magic" the 4 elements you really don't get updates anymore. 20 chapters ago he was supposed to start learning swords and martial arts but it still hasn't shown except for strength training. You never get a read on his power limit. Only that it's larger than normal. 80 chapters and we don't know why his teacher wants to teach him. Why his mother and her are friends in the first place. Why his step mother "really" hates them. Never met the step sister only her name.

I mean let's be honest. There's so much filler of internal dialogues and his sister saying the same thing over and over that we haven't gained anything really. Don't get me wrong I Do like this story, but it's if you cut the sister babble. The internal dialogue which includes the repeat information this story would be about 15 chapters at this point. I don't dislike dialogue like this,

but we have so many mystery's that to this point and they still havnt been solved. Really none.

we don't understand emblems. The 4th princess. Money. His father. His family. His love interest. Able (except like the bare min.). Mana amounts. Magical tools. The degrees of (all) ranking. Spirits. The gods. His origins (they are so mysterious. His sister, her feelings, why they all seem super young, his mothers temperament, will his step mother really kill them? Who will be the actual yandere in this story or will they all be lol) So many mysteries.

is it written well? Yes I think so. Is it filled with useless junk? Yes I think so as well. Will I read it and enjoy it? Yes I will. I just wish there were about 50 chapters or progressing the story. He skipped from like 6mo. To 2 then to 5. I want leads to the mysteries and background info. The story is interesting and I hope as it goes it'll slip in these things instead of taking a slice of life route never showing these things that make the story good.

also I wish that he wasn't so wishy washy he's constantly saying something, internally dialogueing something and then doing the opposite, Or like I mentioned earlier he will say something, and do something then within several sentences it's happening anyways.

im only giving 3 stars because the filler tbh. Otherwise it's 4 if it was filled and progressed and the characters would show their growth easily 5 stars. Also in the tags it says in*est, but fits wholesome at this point, and if it were I'm pretty sure it would take 400 chapters for him to become a teen and to it to progress to that point... unless she r*ped him. He shows a strong aversion and even in this world where it's fine he doesn't show more than a brotherly love for his sister. Or his mother in her loneliness where she developes feeling for her son honestly could be a thing. We only hear about the father he really doesn't show up in the story but about 2-3 times. And his visits even don't play a part in the story only that they happen and the kids never see it. Somehow even tho the mother is up her kids butts she some how has the opportunity to produce kids. Makes you wonder. Mystery? Minute man? Who knows.

the things that are definite are.

1. He loves his sister, and she loves him

2. He is heavily fixated on able's ears

3. His mother loves him and his sister to the moon.

4. His sister has a house high amount of magical power 5. able has a strong reason for being around the MC.

6. able is a transcendent being

7. they are technically commoners

8. MC makes every female blush.

the reason I bring this up? You will see it about 5 times a chapter without fail. And some of the only information that is shuffled around