Outer World Story: The Black Mist that Devours Chapter Completed Discussion

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Personally the novel is bad. Well to be precise, I just say this story is about a person who suddenly transform into a demon lord and he was suppose to be a managing dungeon but the author set the place which is the earth (there might be similar novel settings with this one) was never compatible with. In a sense giving the world a catastrophic emerging of dungeon was much to set human to a survival mode and it is plain to conclude that author imagination regarding "if the world will be turned/transform into a fantasy world" was nothing new about. And the antagonist was always saying experiment number this or that whenever entering a conversation mode is just kinda a monologue.

Even to mention the time skip as far as to tell the readers of what happen to the main characters was kinda chapter consuming with the addition of every character POV. This part should have been at least a short summary that describe the growth in a single chapter.

Even the ending was anticlimax and there things which confusing that need explanation but it just been left it is.
 
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