A Banished Failure Survives in the Borderland and Becomes an S-Rank Exorcist Chapter -- Discussion

Maybe I'm jaded but I can no longer tolerate dense, stuttering JP protagonists unless the plot is really good. This plot is not really good. The writing is stilted and emotionless. Last thing, if the novel is primarily going to be internal dialogue, the MC has to be at least mildly interesting.

Edit: I was revisiting this to give it another shot and decided to leave a review because I'd forgotten I'd written this. Do I have a different opinion? Nope. Still gonna keep reading though.