- #1
Well this seems interesting and bizarre.First, the translation is top notch what's there is a joy to read. The writing is well organized and communicativeđź‘Ť The novel is starting off on the right foot. The MC is the only character with enough screen time to analyze. She seems a chipper likeable mom.The big problem currently is the gap between the synopsis and what's revealed in the first chapter and the very incomplete nature of what's revealed. I'd say Ch1 ends on a cliffhanger but it's more like 10 cliffhangers. I'd also like to know how in a European setting the queen/empress is seizing other people's children? The church take a big payoff again? (From the synopsis) I do have to say the cliffhangers worked and I want to see more. Still deducting a star for now