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Alright, it took me around 2 hours to read half the book. And it should say a lot, since the plot of the story can really be developed into 100+ chapters.What I've read so far seems more like an outline. The writing itself is good (as far as the MTL goes), but yhe story is fragmented. I found myself wondering whether I'm missing some chapters, or the site where I am reading the novel has incomplete chapters, missing sentences, etc.Spoiler
As far as I could tell - no. This book is just that rushed. In one chapter the FL is still auditioning, in the next - she's already riding in the back of the car and being kidnapped. No explanation, it just happened. Then, in the same chapter she's rescued in a way which leaves me completely baffled. What? Why? When? How come? Are the questions appearing in my mind.
[collapse]Anyway, it's kind of a short, mindless read. It can be taken as a general story of this genre crammed with the most important parts, with no necessary or unnecessary fillers in the way.Disappointing, but not the worst I've seen.