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I wana say something.This needs a few tags. “Running gags that are long passed being good”. “s*upid protagonist”. “Ruined a perfectly good novel”. “Dumb”. “Author isn’t even trying”.if you ask me the plot is decent. I mean I’ve never read this kind of situation. Also I’ve personally only read a few modern type fantasy novels. I love dungeon crawling. I love fantasy type novels. I love harem genre. I love op mc’s even more so when they are humble, but... this novel has a running gag of “misunderstandings” I mean. Seriously this whole novel is nothing but a huge misunderstanding. I think the skill/powers the author has written makes him just look lazy. There’s a lack of description and they all look on the surface as nothing but normal everyday “skills”. Honestly if you just spiced them up and explained them and put a little effort it would shine. Not to mention the “pet” has the most understandable and explained skills. Sad.his system for leveling (although he can’t actually level personally) is unique to me I kinda like it, but it’s brought up mostly in the first few chapters and never brought up for the most part again. The skills are super generic like breathing, thinking, pulse. Come on please.the mc’s growth is only in attaching these generic skills and 8/10 of them max out on their own and effortlessly and like pulse apparently makes him invincible well aside literally “defense” which is pretty self explanatory. Also his intelligence maxed out and WHERE THE f*ck IS IT????oh my biggest bone to pick is the dense/naive tag. Yea it’s there but he was naive for about 5 chapters then he turned his brain to littoral mush? Why? Misunderstandings are honestly one thing, but when the MC literally moves on. With. Only. Everything is a damn misunderstanding. Let’s at least treat this novel like someone has a scrap of intelligence where let’s see idk when a monster literally explodes from a small punch to be abnormal? Or that a boss that everyone literally pisses themself (obviously because this is f*cking dumb and I mean it when he’s not around) seeing him is not as weak as a Pomeranian because I mean at least it’s a boss. He will complain he has no skills. Obviously he f*ckING DOES HE READS IT EVERY 2-5 chapters. I can see thru walls. Not a skill right? That’s pretty normal. I’m nothing special. GODDAMN IT. And literally everyone he encounters can see. Can talk. And I mean understand he’s strong but he can’t understand it at all. I mean Everytime someone (which 2/10 times they will say it and not just think it for some god aweful reason) says if he brushes it off. I mean it’s been said at least 10 times. I mean f*ck I made 300, 000yen that’s normal right? For just a few of the thousands of stones I’ve obtained. All adventures can do that yea? But I’m the weakest ever. f*ckING EVER.listen. I want to like it. And I do. But it’s getting old. You’ve ruined it. You should have gave it 10-20 chapters and he slowly learns. People tell him. He’s awkward sure but he eventually gets some recognition. He grows. He asks questions. He doesn’t just keep his status a complete secret because (and at first I understand he’s embarrassed but you have to learn?? RIGHT???!!!) you don’t understand.i don’t understand. What is your goal author? To piss people off?? I want to know.
