- #1
So far, the story feels so flat and soooo shallow. Really2 shallow, there's no deep in any side of the story. The conversation is awkward. There's no emotion despite the author tried to write it down. I've been generous with the 3 stars. If the story continue this way, even 2 stars are too much star. If I continue to read this story, and the story somehow got better, maybe i'll correct my review