Water Magician Chapter v1221 Discussion

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This novel is a poor written story. Let just say that the MC tells the readers that this novel is about slow life with intense battle. On the contrary, the Novel structure was at first up held its slow life with intense battle but it changes during the middle chapters. The Point of View changes to the side characters such as Abel or the trio party of Room 10 which is okay at first then suddenly it became a mess. The Author was skipping on the daily life of MC such as time skip or by using the sentence "MC daily life were unchanging" including when MC meets a certain event/person were not elaborated further.

And the most annoying thing is the info dump ranging from lectures on How TAXES and Countries works from our worlds were somehow discussed by the government of fantasy. Further more, It just does not makes sense where the MC discovers food ingredients, minerals and food which he eventually proclaimed that it was actually taste the same as the existing stuff in the Earth. The difference was only its name. Seriously, this is just silly and wrong.
 
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