- #1
I will keep it short.It starts out interesting, as the reader you become curious about the world and the magic system. Pretty good so far.The MC goes into detail about is thoughts and other scenes are pretty detailed as well in the beginning. Later on this goes out the window and you're practically screaming at your screen for the author to explain how something or why something works.Spoiler
I gave it the benefit of the doubt because of the slow life and the MC "perpetual youth"
[collapse]This story is no slow life, riddled with unfulfilling fights and illogical actions. Where half the chapters the MC is not even in.