The Bottom-Tier Adventurer Middle-Aged Guy: Realizing My Unexpected Cheat Abilities in the Territory Management Game for an Effortless Real-Life Chapter -- Discussion

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Yet another Kakuyomu novel, so it would need miracle to be average (3 stars).

All Kakuyomu novels, this one included, fallow similar pattern, novel start average, but after few chapters MC is thrown in dungeon, or some other basic generic setting, to make novel easy to write.

You can easily tell that novel is written "on the go", without future planing, some not well thought early decisions, like having acces to unlimited fruits that increase stats, completely break novel. Author often forgets that MC posesed body of person from another world, and writes in style that says that MC was reincarnated and lives in this world from childhood.

MC is given multiple cheat powers, to make easy for author reusing content from another novels, and sadly it is plainly visible, he has unlimited number of stat increasing fruits (It is extremely similar to one popular novel), ability to steal other people and monsters skills (classic), and ability to use shop from another world (classic slow life thing).

World building bareilly exists in begining, MC knows nothing about world, while living in it for 10 years after body swap, like what? And world building completely disappears after MC is thrown into dungeon. There are to many one time only characters.

Sadly even novel setting is broken, after body swap MC played game for multiple years, and never noticed "shop button", like how, that is not how gaming works, after weeks players will backtrack their steeps, to check if they missed something, and he didn't t try that for years? In simple mobile like game with small world?

Ps. Above review contains no major spoilers, I tried to not write about content that is in 10 chapter+, only mentioned spending most of the time in dungeon, happens above that chapters.
 
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