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I've read almost the entire web novel through google MT so I could see through to the end, which is around 355 chapters. All in all, the story concept is interesting but the author is not talented enough to explore the possibilities the concept provides. Instead, the story is stretched out painfully where one event can occur, can be recited again in the future three times later by the MC, and included in a side story or two from other character's perspectives. Many story elements are also not explained well enough, including Spoiler
the method by which the hero manipulates the memories people have
[collapse] And of course the main protagonist has to fulfill every single trope of a "revenge against the hero who booted me out" stereotype. There are much more interesting stories with less filler, more logical structures, more believable characters and less frustrations for faithful readers out there that are more worthy of your time.