A Life In A Different World That Begins With Moss Chapter v12 Discussion

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It's a mid novel. The evolution is a bit quick pace as the evolution is very rushed, too powerful and less thought within each evolution. The biggest problem is the evolution monster is that it's very inconsistent with it's idea of evolution. Spoiler

the idea of evolution should be growing and adaptation of the strongest version of X. We went from a moss to plant, which make sense but then went from plant to a bug then to a cat. Really inconsistent which is a shame cause I love evolution novels especially stuff like the world devouring serpent or the Evolving space alien. While I have only read 29 chapter of this novel, I just can't say I want to continue anymore

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If there's one lesson to make evolution novel, is that the evolution should make sense otherwise it become a digimon wanna be.
 
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