My Savior Identity Got Exposed Because Of My Savings Chapter Completed Discussion

I am legitimitely amazed by how bad this is. At least there are a few interesting ideas, but everything about the plotline and every scene is just so baffling that it's halfway to looking like a self-aware parody. I'm still 50/50 on whether the author is just this bad, or whether he intentionally made it even worse just for fun.

In the first two chapters, I see what I think is the most s*upid and contrived scene I have ever read in my entire life. It starts with his wife questioning why he is gone on a mysterious business trip for a month.

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"Song, you have finally decided to find your hubby's secret stash?!" Spirit exclaims, her eyes twinkling with light as she eagerly stepped over.

That man definitely has a problem. We must help Big Sis find the evidence and go confront him!

Coco also rushed forward, "Then let's start right away. Where do you want to search first?"

This question instantly stumped the party since they had no experience in this type of stuff.

"Maybe... we can ask our fans? Maybe they will have an idea in this field?" Music suggests.

With gritted teeth and great reluctance, Song accepts and nods: "Alright, let's do it!"

Immediately, Music opened up her broadcast room with the smartphone and went live. However, unlike the usual stuff where her fans go crazy right away, there's not a single message on the screen. This gave the internet influencer the idea of it not working and was about to relaunch the app.

Then the next moment —

"HOLY SHIT, HOLY SHIT, HOLY SHIT!" What do I see?!"

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what??????? This novel literally went so off the rails of basic logic immediately that I already ceased to feel any emotions reading it. Even when the young masters appear later, which would typically piss me off, I was already reading this with the mental state of a spectator just trying to see how bad this novel actually is so I didn't feel anything.

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Wife accidently finds out he has millions and millions of dollars of art in his room on stream and the worlds powers suddenly take notice. It brings enormous trouble and Wife regrets but decides to live stream again anyways to ask the world to help find him because he missed the date he said he would come back. They find stuff worth billions or whatever and suddenly the strongest powers of the world are threatening their nation. Luckily every time it looks like they're about to be mu*dered/ens*aved, they just happen to find something from the MC again that perfectly solves their problem.

They continue to alternate between streaming to the whole world and young masters threatening them for 90 chapters. The young masters of the highest power of the world even ask their men to start spamming the livestream with their threats. Truly the most powerful methods the peak power of the world can employ.

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It's so s*upid. You'd think after seeing all this unreal futuristic technology and wealth people would question whether this is some divine figure or perhaps aliens or something and proceed with a bit of caution? But nope, they just assume he's tr*sh. It's a Chinese Novel classic!

That's literally the first 80% of the story. They keep streaming and finding the MC's stuff and "wow he's such a gigachad", and the whole peanut gallery claps. It reads like a middle schoolers wet dream, but the next part of the story carries on in being so bad that I would believe it if you told me the story was made as a joke.

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MC comes back and enacts revenge on the strongest power on Earth as well as the blood sect. Oh yeah, suddenly the young masters know aliens and its a xianxia story now with another planet s*upid.

He kills the blood sect soldiers, the young master, the blood chief, the young master's dad the blood lord. But they are just a power under the West continent. So he kills the Royal family soldier, then the most powerful of the contents soldiers, then the Royal family. This Royal family part comes with its own peanut gallery of all the citizens of the city or whatever.

But they were just under another power because why not? Lord Aotian the dragon young master comes over and dies. Then the Dragon Ancestor calls over the rest of the powers of the universe and they all die easily fighting the MC.

Then the space god nightmare comes over and dies in a few paragraps too, and the story ends immediately. For some reason the world is somehow watching too, so there's one last peanut gallery for the last bit.

This is the last 30 chapters. Literally a speedrun up the whole chain of "young masters" and "ancestors". Look up "expanding scale martialmemes" for a fantastic meme this reminds me of....... Every step of the way they swagger over, call him tr*sh or whatever, beg/threaten to call their high power, and die

"He's Celestial Lord? tr*sh" - dies

"He's Celestial King? tr*sh" - dies

"He's Celestial Emperor? tr*sh" - dies

You'd think at least one person could excersice minimum caution. As they die they also send out their 1000s of best soldiers who die instantly too, so I guess 99% of the strongest cultivators of every level are dead now.

This is what made me somewhat question whether the author was serious. It's hard to write a 30 chapter chain of events like this that is so mindnumbingly boring and cyclical.

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The fact that the rating is even this high is a miracle. This was terrible beginning to end.

One last thing that makes me sure this must be written by a high schooler: uses Jarvis, Iron Man, and Dr Robotnik in the story.