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Flawed MC, flawed premises.... but its building and growingMC is actually fairly overpowered, but his personality and situation make him like a rotten onion who is peeling off his outer shell and showing that he had a good origin and given a chance he could be a good guy.in the end he is taking the high road, while heavily considering the cowards route, so it can come across duplicitous? or maybe a bit heavy handed in how he ends up doing the good/better thing? but the way the story flows, it feels like a PERSON an actual character making decisions... instead of an op MC who just does the perfectist thing everthe time travel plot point could be a back breaker for some people, but considering it CURRENTLY appears to be tied with the big bad and a major plot point... it currently works for me. we are also in a time where the MC obviously has a leg up from knowing some future stuff, but he wasnt there. he doesnt have a perfectist memory of very thing ever. its CURRENTLY working pretty well. we'll see how it goes on from hereI'm interested what the author does with the big bad evil org. they seem kinda of unrealistically powerful/competent right now? and with the destruction of the future seemingly their fault? I wonder how the author will explain it, or is it just going to be bad guys doing bad things cause they are bad guys