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Concept of the story is really interesting and that was what pulled me in. But I just can't accept the MC.Dude is an orphan adopted by one of the best hunters of the country. After adoption he was top of his class. Ride through the education system as a valedictorian. He got a civil service job and promoted to the top. His job is to control and direct the hunter teams. He is good at his job. Disaster struck when he was using his first vacation after a year of work. I believe he is 30+ years old when he time traveled back.So he is supposed to be this intelligent, competent, ambitious, driven, goal oriented person. And if I dare to speculate he must have some interpersonal communication skills considering his job is managing people and he is good at it. Yet MC we got post time travel is just meh. This dissonance just kills the story for me.
