About Touma-kun, Who Wants to Spend His Time Quietly, Is Liked by the School’s Madonna Chapter 8 Discussion

Uninspired start, author needs to learn to write better opening sentences; my name is ___ only works when the name's unique or your next sentence is a real banger which it wasn't. It'd have been better to skip the whole first chapter and go straight to the second; the beeping of an alarm clock is better than an awkward introduction, show don't tell.

FL's got a few screws loose, she's been stalked before but see's nothing wrong with stalking in turn, and what message does it send that her efforts work?

The premise was decent but ML gives in way too easy, it's a pity.