Rebirth in One Piece as Deputy Captain Chapter 10 Discussion

I can't give this anything more than 3 stars and anything less for two reasons.

The first being a good reason, this is still only up to chapter 10 so still a lot of potential for this novel to get better and improve since it is still early.

The second is the bad, this is hard to read for those first couple chapters that are out and I mean hard. The translation/english is pretty broken at times and going along with that the MCs interactions with Garp are too strange it's like they can't speak normally and have to say "smelly brat" or "old bastard" every time they talk to each other.

But I still have hope that maybe farther into this things get patched up more and straightened out, this looks really interesting and has potential to be good.