- #1
Translation is good, and I MTL'ed the rest (very readable).As someone that read it all, unlike the rest here, I think I can give a more complete opinion.The plot worked great, I had a lot of fun. My only problem is the ending itself because it was sooo abrupt.The side story helped with that issue 100% though. Supposedly it should continue at some point but at the very least I wasn't left with a cliffhanger until/if it continues.The characters are very lively. It sure helps to make the story enganging and fun all the way.I read some talked about it going in a poly direction as a bad thing. It has nothing to do with the quality of the writing or the story itself, it's not the base of the story in the first place either.This isn't a shounen harem where the girls are brainless and the MC is s*upid and dense like a black hole, that's just your bias talking.It's literally only on the side story that's ONE chapter. You can just ignore it altogether and be left with that pretty open ending if that makes you happier, people.In my case I found it pretty funny because of all the bickering and the fact that it's not even clear who's who when the kids appear.Also, MC's reaction is gold in terms of chill, which is partly what drives the story for me because I find it really funny thanks to how it was written.