The Reincarnated Assassin is a Genius Swordsman Chapter 10 Discussion

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  • #1
thought it would be good but these stories can't help but trying to make their characters literal gods with no flaws before or after reincarnation, the first chapter shows that the word choices are edgy and over the top trying

to sound more complicated than it needs to be such as "morass" and for assassins being trained to have no

emotion and killing indoctrination just sounds cringe and doesn't fit it at all purely so subversion of wording

in the first chapter just to seem different without actually painting any hardship or brainwashing this story

is bad 0/5 hard pass considering it didn't even spend a full chapter building our "hero" 600+ chapters ongoing atm
 
  • #2
English may not be this Authors first language but, besides her books being Great ... they are easy to read and the occasional blurb is easily forgiven & forgotten. Loved this Betas story as much as her Alphas! can't wait to read the Hammas story!
 
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