Devil’s Warmth Chapter 33 Discussion

  • Thread starter shiro2
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  • #1
I can't say I like it, can't say I hate it.

But I find the POV too messed up. The FL is more like the NPC/side character. She hardly gets a POV. And everytime it's I already did my best to protect him. The side characters gets more line than her. I think this far, the ML had more lines than her.

Multi POV was never my cup of tea but I didn't like how she says too little lines. It's hard to relate and I feel like just a bystander, I can't absorb myself into the story.
 
  • #2
ohh hoooh the catastrophe is finally coming hahahaha
 
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