Welcome to Dungeon Hotel Chapter 30 Discussion

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Translation need work. Narration in past tense, please. Other than that, this novel suffers from subpar writing. The style is very childish, and no, the argument that Korean novels are simply written that way doesn't work. There are Korean novels that are written well, and this type of copy-paste-tweak novel is not the type that has good writing. Main character has potential, I suppose, but is utterly uninspired. Main ML is a push over apparently. The whole trope of 'character (usually ML or side lead) acts like a dog', all cute and tail wagging or whatever is boring and is a trope that needs to stop. Setting is also nonsensical and doesn't carry enough weight. Why wouldn't an apocalyptic world warp society to the point of major change? Why is it that such a strategic source of power, an S-rank hunter, have no protections or privilege against a common man trying to threaten them with social death (?) It just doesn't make sense. Of course, the ML is also nonsensical for not just walking away. Dialogue is childish and there is no semblance of actual conversation.

I do not believe this novel deserves the rating it does.
 
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