Exiled Noble Lady Crafts While Traveling in a Campervan in Another World Chapter 53 Discussion

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From the description: "A cheat story of a production job in alchemy."

A lighthearted story about travelling and enjoying life. If that was all, I'd give this story a decent rating. However, this is also supposed to be a crafting story and the crafting really drags the rest of the story down.

I'm in the story, everything is fine. The MC creates something new and more often than not, I'm dragged out of the immersion.
    • Some creations are perfectly fine: potions, golems, magic items.
    • Some are basically expected: It wouldn't be a modern MC if they didn't make Spoiler

      guns and bombs

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    • However some are just completely immersion breaking. The final straw for me was: Spoiler

      when the video cameras and computer came out. Even if you could fully imagine and create the physical device, where did the software come from?

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The alchemy might as well be wish granting at this point.
 
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