Exiled Noble Lady Crafts While Traveling in a Campervan in Another World Chapter 54 Discussion

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The story at this point could have been compressed into seven chapters and you'd miss nothing.

It doesn't help that the author has a very.. Hm. I feel they're trying to use short sentences to paint word pictures but it feels basic and repetitive more than anything else.

Essentially, it's a travelogue with no tension. And the author has no sense of when to move on.
 
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