After Being Transported into a Book, I Adopted the Villain Chapter 47 part2 Discussion

The MC Shen Yu transmigrated into a book as mere cannon fodder. To change his haggard fated he decided to adopt the villain, who was the cause for his doom.

The frame of the plot is interesting, well I love the setting of MC raising ML and they form an unbreakable bond. the translation is splendid. The flow of the story ist not to fast but also not to slow. a good slice of life story without big drama. Low burn Love Story of the MC and the ML, many fluffy buffly scene.

But..... there are many things that I find strange if you give a little thought of it :

- First the age difference between MC and ML. the first time they met, the MC was in his early 20s and ML was only 11 years old, maybe 9-10 years different. That irritated me a wee bit. well, I can overlook that, because and I just blank out the fact that the ML is way younger than the MC. I imagined him just a little bit older.

- The characterize of SY, in original life he was just a simple baker. In the book, he played the role of shabol hair. Sometimes he was described as fiery and had a strong stare, an overpowering aura. Where did he get all his strong aura and confidence?

- The way too fast development of ML's obsession with MC. It just actually need 1 week for the ML to develop a strong "love" to MC. With ML character he wouldn't trust anybody so fast.

- ML's action was not reasonable for an 11/12-year-old boy.Spoiler

school plotline. TL plotted to let the girl, who annoyed him to get bullied, till she tried to commit su*cide.

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- MC 's irritated reaction to ML.... like damn sometimes I think he is really dumb. and the way the author tried to verify his actions make no sense. Spoiler

bithday scene -.-= wtf..... he just adopted TL for merely 2 months and believe he could change TL's character completely.

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- Sometimes MC put himself on a high horse that he was ever so noble, but he totally forgot that he only adopted ML only because of his own and selfish needs. Moreover, in the beginning, he totally bite on the fact that ML is the villain and always mistrust ML -.-.. but later on: "ML is my boy, I would forgive every bad doing of ML" ha?! MC wanted to teach ML morals and how to be a good person, but contrary he actually did nothing like that."

You can see that on how he acted to the actual Protagonist of the book. Firstly he wants to carve's a way for a peaceful relationship between the ML and Protag. but he just mad that worst. he even tried to that. "oh ML don't like Progtag... I don't like him too. " (table flip). Protag hasn't even done something bad to them. Spoiler

ML got jealous at Protag. because MC showed some interest in Progtag. So he self-harmed himself and blamed that on the Protag. and MC know that but still done nothing and just concluded that he doesn't like the Protag.

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Hypocrite!!! over judgmental... think he is always right...... I really don't like he characterize (1, 5/5). I believe he will turn to a typical damsel in distress kind of Character. dump and always had to be rescued from the ML.

The MC made me lost interest in half of the novel. Just finish because want to know how the Autor will wrap this Story. And because of the fantastic work of the Translator.