After Being Transported into a Book, I Adopted the Villain Chapter 20 Discussion

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This novel well written

Easy to understand conflicts, with your crazy rich I own everything plot.

But, Its matter of preferences, and its kinda I hate the plot.

So I drop it

The reason is the stories ML about ten years old boy who is too manipulative for his age. I would to say, he is mentally ill. Even if count in the background story like the boy for one year raised in bad environment, I think its to much to make the boy lost control over his temper that much, I mean he is too violence for ten years boy. He hurt his self to seeking attention from MC, it just. No.

And, I am not fans of romanticize of mental ill in sociopath side
 
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Only half way through and it feels like there’s more than one person writing this book. The initial writing style (in the first several chapters) was very clean and well-written for an author who speaks English as a second language; however, in later chapters there is a noticeable shift in prose.
 
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