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People are being wayyy to harsh on this~I was able to read till the end, and I really liked it! Of course, it’s not some world breaking novel, but it’s cute and something to read when relaxing. Although I did want the MC to have a bit more individuality and, more understanding and insight on his personal life, (for ex. His bakeries, his enjoyment in art, him baking!) I just felt like getting to know our MC better would help the storyline. I’m not sure if this is a plot hole, but, the biggest part of the plot wasn’t solved? We found out nothing?Spoiler
Why was he disappearing? Because he didn’t follow the storyline? Okay.. But why didn’t he disappear anymore? One sentence that basically said; “Oh i’m not disappearing anymore so I guess that’s solved lol” like..? Why bring up the problem, develop it half way, and then stop?!?
[collapse] I just think that if the author had some cuties who gave them feedback, this could’ve been an amazing story! So much wasted potential. QAQ