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Quite a fun story. I am thoroughly enjoying it.What is, however, really bad about the story is the translation. This next part is for the translators. Sometimes I have no idea who is talking and sometimes a sentence that is meant to be said by one character or to another will have the pronouns switched or the opposite character will be the one to "say" the sentence when it is clearly meant to be said by someone else. For example, some chapters are first person and then suddenly in third person and then again in first person. Additionally, usually you will have a line-break/new paragraph in conversations that usually means the characters are alternating speaking, but sometimes there is a line-break/new paragraph when I am pretty sure the same character is still speaking their part of the dialogue. I have been so incredibly close to dropping this novel because of that alone because I hate having to stop mid-sentence to figure out what the heck is going on.Luckily this type of story is my favorite niche. I will continue to read for now.