When I Put up the Strongest Barrier in the Country, It Became Too Peaceful and I Was Banished. They Did Know That That Barrier Isn’t Permanent, Right? Chapter 21 Discussion

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Cannot recommend, period. Every character is one dimensional, MC is an unintentional parody of a doormat.

The atmosphere is also nonexistent. Nothing is every described properly, and the pacing is horrible. Author doesn't know how to write more than one line of text at once, so everything is super brief, but everything is also being constantly repeated every chapter. (Barrier strong, kingdom s*upid, MC looks weak, I can attack cause I only use barrier, villain s*upid, Waifu endlessly chasing one step behind MC)

If you want a good Idea for a new novel. Copy this exact novel, but add detail and Make the MC a confident (Or at least a proactive) guy, as the base for the plot is something really interesting but that no one has ever done properly.

It's a 5 star if you're a masochist and hate yourself tho.
 
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