My Sister Took My Fiancé and Now I’m Forced to Marry the Ugly Duke Chapter 40 Discussion

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The whole novel is too rished, the plot is very shallow and is hard to feel any kind of sympathy for the protagonists.

What they called love striked me more as gratitude from two people who recieved none in their whole life and mistakenly perceived being treated in a decent way as love.

Also, Lucrecia has no say in anything, she's a doormat. The author described her as a very clever woman, but it is never showed as such. We only see her being this outstand character when it comes to make her sister look super dumb.

The overall plot is too rushed and somethings makes no sense at all. It's hard to keep track of time when the same chapter mentions something that is happening in the present and jumps to the future, just to come back to the present again. It seems the author didn't really kept track of what they wanted to do and came back later to add more scenes.

If you want to just read something to pass time, this novel may be nice. But if you expect any kind of development, interesting characters or a good story, you will not find it here.
 
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