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Honest opinion? It's a good read. It flows very well, the characters are unique. I really like the concept of the a.i. And it went in a way that is really enjoyable. Everyone is pretty well getting used to a voice in your head being an op protagonist, and this one took a concept that most hadn't when it came to that. the characters are unique and you can get a sense of their addition to the novel, if I have any complaints on them it would be that it's hard to have a good description in mind. Aside from their height or their overall attitude. The world building is so/so. You learn more about past lives than the new one imo, if not they are about 50/50. The flow is good, but it's too fast. It's missing a ton of filler that could have been added. Which is fine for those who don't want info dumps, but the ch's are rather short from it.I don't know if it's me or not, but this whole thing reads in one tone. Also the implied harem is kinda dry. It's like 3/4 of the females just kinda gave in. Actually they really did. There's zero romance but pretty much all females but 2 have just stayed quiet anytime it's brought up.My honest only complaint is how the dialogue has read that everything has mostly been well, and that everyone gets along. But more than once has another conversation came up between the 'heroines' and others and they will say the MC is pushy, or condescending. It's odd? You can see it everyonce in awhile sure. But not anywhere close to where they were having these perspective changes. Actually before the first time it's brought up I hadn't seen it at all. Mostly I've only seen it when he's talked to men.like one of the first people he meets is a rather meek healer and she seems completely submissive and at times very attracted to the MC. But in one of the first perspective changes she is talking about how the MC is pushy and talks like a noble, and how he kind of took over the party. they asked him to more or less. Sometimes it's hard to tell who says what because the dialogue is kinda thrown out there, but they were looking for a new memeber, they were looking for someone assertive, they were looking for a male. And to top it all off EVERYONE in their area is fighting to keep him there. The members he meets offer him a room, the guild offer him a higher rank and insider quests, but they say he is pushy, condescending, and a womanizer. It's a bit much.
