- #1
This story is fine, so far. The main character is funny and likable, she's got a fiery temper and her mouth runs away from her, I like that a lot. But it's still too early to know where the story is going, which is why I'm actually writing this review: the most noteworthy thing is that the chapters are suuuuuuuuper short. Like a lot of them are less than a printed page long. I'm on "volume" 3 "chapter" 10 right now, but in reality it's more like chapter 3 page 10. So don't get your hopes up that the story you're reading will be very far along. No face-slapping situations have happened yet, the main character is still in the "down on her luck" part of the storyline; I'm assuming that this turns around in later chapters, but we're just not there yet.I read up to what's labeled as v3c10 right now and with how short the chapters are, I kind of assume that I'm going to forget what's happening in this story each time a new chapter comes out. Each chapter doesn't even necessarily show one "scene, " which is disappointing.I think I'll put this story in a category for stories I like but chapters too short to have any meaningful plot progression, so I'll check in on it every 6 months or something to see how the plot has progressed, since it doesn't really look like the chapters are coming out all that often anyway.