Reborn Into A Wealthy Family To Tease The Villain Chapter 20 Discussion

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Their first meeting: MC was waiting for the taxi, ML saw him from his car. MC did not notice ML.

Their second meeting: in the tailor shop, MC checked out ML's figure and whistled right in his face. This was the moment when I stopped caring about MC. And it is not like MC didn't know how awful that is. When he was told who that was, he was horrified. He was totally ok with humiliating someone of a lower standing. What about ML's reaction? Somehow his analysis of what happened was "how curious, he is not scared of me" and now "this as*hole has no idea who I am".

Their third meeting: on the dinner party. Some actual dialog here. ML forcefully kisses MC. This was the moment when I stopped caring about ML.

This is not a joke or exaggeration. This is literally the "development" of their relationship.

What I am trying to say is that this is not a good written story.

Another thing is how unrealistic MC is. Before the transmigration he was sick. So sick that he could not finish playing a song on a piano. After transmigration, he was able to win a fight against a gang armed with baseball bats (bc the original owner was often fighting. But the whole gang? With baseball bats? Come on!). He is able to manage a big company, knows how accounting books work (and was able to find inconsistencies), knows how to distinguish real antique from fake, plays a piano and a violin like a pro, a real smooth talker who knows how to get people to his side and who knows what else. Also he is 18 years old and goes to college.

In conclusion: a poorly written story, not worthy of your time. Not the worst I've read, hence 2 stars and not 1.
 
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