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This story has A LOT, and I mean A LOT, of plot holes to the point where I question if it was written by a 12 years old. Many times I feel like the author is either suffering from short term memory or is just straight out thinking that the readers are as slow wits as the author is.For example, in the beginning the MC beat up a gang of people without even a little effort, including his cousin. BUT the problem is the MC was a sick person who died at 18 on his death bed because his body is so weak he could barely stand and just one week after he transmigrated into the novel he suddenly know how to fight based on the original character MEMORY???? Lol, if this works then my memory of Jet Li fighting would make me fight like Jet Li already. It just doesn't work that way.Another example was how he suddenly know how to play piano and violin when it was mentioned that before he transmigrated he never have many chances to play... and the original character apparently stop playing piano when he was like 6 so no idea how the MC suddenly became OP at musical instruments.Also, somehow after MC transmigrated into the body of the original character ALL these people started to fall for the MC as if the MC has a golden finger/halo over his head that makes characters in novel fall for him... actually it would make more senses if that was the case that MC gain some kind of golden finger/halo because I doubt an 18 years old can suddenly outsmart a businessman who has way more experience than him. MC died at 18 and has never work so him suddenly becoming business smart and know exactly how to draft a perfect business plan is just too s*upid in the beginning.I dropped this too early and has no idea where the MPREG tag came from and no one in the comment also mention it too so I'm not sure about that. I only read this novel because of the mpreg tag, lol. Not going to spent my time reading this 200 plus novel that did not make sense since chapter 1.