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Indeed, other reviewers have read more than me, but I am reading the English translated versions because I cannot deal with MTL versions. Lol.This novel sure look long but chapters are relatively shorter than regular chapter compare to other novels. Give it a shot. I think that is what I wanted to say the least. This novel is fine; not the best but worth the time to read. The story revolves around Ye Jian, who was reborn and was able to turn over her life. The main antagonist is her cousin, Ye Ying, who is undoubtedly a brat, but what is more, she is quite a character you should pay attention to. I can compare her to other protagonists in other novels that have the same plot of reborn.The novel started well. The flow is excellent. The story is building every chapter. The only thing that I have something to complain about would be the sudden change of the protagonist. I still cannot accept the way the author suddenly change her into a super God who doesn't give up easily, doesn't even suffer from some depression from everything, and suddenly knows everything about the military and be able to do anything so good suddenly when in fact in her previous life, she cannot even do something about her cousin who always haunts her for the "seducing issue". Spoiler
The author gave an excuse to this that she once had this work, etc., but that cannot excuse the protagonist halo the author put on to Ye Jian.
[collapse]SpoilerI am also not a big fan of how Ye Jian suddenly entered a whole new world of the battlefield at the age of 14? Is that even reasonable? And they made it legal? No way. I would love to see a more realistic person who would work hard to be a great soldier than to see someone suddenly being great at everything. I wish the author did try to solve everything in her junior and senior years of studying than making her part of something serious like the military and politics at a young age with the excuse that she is the protagonist.
[collapse]This novel has a lot of loopholes. The author made Ye Jian into a super God to the point that you know whatever will happen, she will succeed. The antagonist has a destiny of doom from the moment the author did this, which is uncreative.The love story part is also quite questionable, but I will let it go as I kind of like the male lead. His character is not always present, but I think it is alright.I don't know why I am still reading this; I think it is because I am curious about the jade thing. I don't know if it was revealed by for now, I don't think it was. I am also trying to see if author will include something about Ye Jian's father or what because it is more focused on her mother's side.Spoiler[collapse]